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20070604, Panel 1, Sarine's first bubble: "nether" -> "neither"

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20070606, Panel 3, the guard's second bubble "he would have several other people would be arriving" -> "he would have several other people arriving"

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20070608, panel 5, Jon's second bubble, "somewhere where between" -> "somewhere between"

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DEATH: NO. BUT YOU WERE TOLD YOU WOULD WALK WITH DEATH EVERY DAY.
Polly: Oh...Yes, Corporal Scallot said that.
DEATH: HE IS AN OLD FRIEND. YOU MIGHT SAY HE IS ON THE INSTALMENT PLAN.


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20070615, panel 3, Meji's first bubble, "you'd" -> "d'you" (as in 'how did you')

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Polly: I'm not going to die, am I? I mean right now?
DEATH: NO. BUT YOU WERE TOLD YOU WOULD WALK WITH DEATH EVERY DAY.
Polly: Oh...Yes, Corporal Scallot said that.
DEATH: HE IS AN OLD FRIEND. YOU MIGHT SAY HE IS ON THE INSTALMENT PLAN.


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pillaroforder wrote:
20070615, panel 3, Meji's first bubble, "you'd" -> "d'you" (as in 'how did you')


*de-lurk*

"D'you" is incorrect since "did" can't be contracted.
The proper contraction of "would" is "'d", so "How would you know..." would become "How'd you know...".

*re-lurk*


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20070625, panel 3, Miyo's second bubble, "giving" -> "given"

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DEATH: NO. BUT YOU WERE TOLD YOU WOULD WALK WITH DEATH EVERY DAY.
Polly: Oh...Yes, Corporal Scallot said that.
DEATH: HE IS AN OLD FRIEND. YOU MIGHT SAY HE IS ON THE INSTALMENT PLAN.


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20070629, panel 4, Sarine's third bubble, "looking him" -> "looking for him"

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DEATH: NO. BUT YOU WERE TOLD YOU WOULD WALK WITH DEATH EVERY DAY.
Polly: Oh...Yes, Corporal Scallot said that.
DEATH: HE IS AN OLD FRIEND. YOU MIGHT SAY HE IS ON THE INSTALMENT PLAN.


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20070702, panel 1, Sarine's second bubble, "with out" -> "without"

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DEATH: NO. BUT YOU WERE TOLD YOU WOULD WALK WITH DEATH EVERY DAY.
Polly: Oh...Yes, Corporal Scallot said that.
DEATH: HE IS AN OLD FRIEND. YOU MIGHT SAY HE IS ON THE INSTALMENT PLAN.


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06072007: Jon, third panel "happen" should be "happened"

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July 09 2007, first panel, 6th bubble, forever should be hyphenated, as it's one word.

Edit: Also, in the second panel, there should be a comma after "Well". No comma in the last panel, last bubble after "suppose", and if that's a comma after "Sarine", it should be a period. (Yay for commas)

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20070713, panel 1, Meji's third bubble, "they sale" -> "they sell"

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panel 3 or 4: a "worst" that I assume should be "worse"

I have now read the rules.....there's a competition it seems.....

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Last panel, Jon: SUPPOSE -> SUPPOSED


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Please read the RULES on page 1.

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DEATH: NO. BUT YOU WERE TOLD YOU WOULD WALK WITH DEATH EVERY DAY.
Polly: Oh...Yes, Corporal Scallot said that.
DEATH: HE IS AN OLD FRIEND. YOU MIGHT SAY HE IS ON THE INSTALMENT PLAN.


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20070820, panel 2, priest's first bubble, "happen" -> "happened"

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DEATH: NO. BUT YOU WERE TOLD YOU WOULD WALK WITH DEATH EVERY DAY.
Polly: Oh...Yes, Corporal Scallot said that.
DEATH: HE IS AN OLD FRIEND. YOU MIGHT SAY HE IS ON THE INSTALMENT PLAN.


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